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:iconoleg778:'s OC. :)
Да, мое интернет-соединение настолько сурово, что я смогла залить этот рисунок только сейчас. Как говорится, и года не прошло. >.>
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First of all, wow. When I saw this in my messages I was blown away, and even more when I saw it full-view.

Vision: Incredible - there's just such a story behind all of this, and with the nick in his ear and the way he looks off into the distance with the sun behind him...it's absurdly perfect.

Originality: Had to give you 4 stars on this one - because it's MLP, which makes it not exactly original, and because there are quite a few pictures done in this manner. However, doing it in an open field, with the rain as well, makes it look more original than it would have.

Technique: Perfect! I'm still trying to figure out how you managed to do all of those clouds, and the little grass/hay/thing blades so expertly. I keep looking over it and finding a new detail each time, and the woodland in the background is just lovely. His eyes are done with such depth. However, I feel like his raised foreleg is raised a bit too far for him to just be walking. I would think the bent joint should come to about his chest level, not above it as it is now. And he doesn't look wet from the rain, either, which seems a bit odd, unless it just started.

Impact: I really am blown away by this image, don't get me wrong. However, his cutie mark - a flash drive? - and the background seem to clash a bit, and the way he's looking off with no idea what he's looking at makes it kind of off.

Overall this is just such a wonderful picture. Bravo.
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This is a striking piece. The sense of space well played out and the objects clear and well described. There's a good use of overall contrast.

Some constructive critique:

What stands out most to me here is the pony. That's good, it's the focus after all. However it doesn't feel like the pony is integrated into the space as much as it could be. I see you've brought a bit of the color of the field into the pony but I'd like just a bit more, perhaps in the shadow shapes to really integrate it into the space. Shadows have color after all.

On the pony itself, the ear is a bit stone like in appearance. It helps to consider the ear as very thin and also semi transparent. This prevents any large shadows from existing in the upper part of the ear and also gives you an opportunity to have light shining through the ear a little, creating a neat effect.

The green of the eyes draws a lot of attention. Again, it's a focus, it is supposed to. It may be my subjective opinion but I'd like a little more overall contrast on the pony to compete with that attention. Of course if you do that the contrast of other parts of the piece would need to change as well to keep things stylistically consistent.

It's hidden a bit, but the spine is a little flat.

I hope this helps. As a whole I enjoy your style and the painterly approach to the textures.

As always with my critiques, the star rating system is strange to me for critique... Critique is for improvement, not rating.
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:iconinvaderzen1234:
InvaderZen1234 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Student Artist
Will you please make a pic of my oc, please? Thanks!
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:icontoxic-talon:
Toxic-Talon Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is BEAUTIFUL could i have a request!?
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:iconsky-winds:
Sky-Winds Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Do you take requests? :)
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:iconnyarmarr:
Nyarmarr Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Sorry, I don't take requests anymore. I might change my mind, but anyway, it won't be any time soon.
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:iconpinkiemina:
Pinkiemina Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012
Отличный ОС и отличный рисунок! :33
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:iconnyarmarr:
Nyarmarr Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Спасибо)
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:iconpinkiemina:
Pinkiemina Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012
Да это тебе спасибо, что такого Стардиска няшного нарисовала. ^_^
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:iconstar--sprout:
Star--Sprout Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student General Artist
Your backgrounds are stunning, as always!! Great work :)
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:icondaftopia:
daftopia Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
gorgeous
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:iconsavestate:
Savestate Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome, love the lighting man!
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:iconlost-in-equestria:
Lost-in-Equestria Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
Very pretty ^^
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:iconlambomill:
lambomill Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is some of the best MLP artwork I've ever seen .o. <3 great work!
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:iconmlpmaconmixx:
mlpMaconMixx Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is simply gorgeous. I would love to add it to the Featured gallery at #MLP-Original-Ponies if you'll allow! :D
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:iconfoxnightly2010:
foxnightly2010 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Student General Artist
Awesome the pony and background XD
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:icon8loodyrain:
8loodyrain Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconbrohoof1plz:
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:iconkilroyjenkins:
KilroyJenkins Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012
Spectacular.
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:iconshamon-bananas:
Shamon-Bananas Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Student General Artist
Absolutely beautiful! :wow:
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:iconklarkkentthe3rd:
KlarkKentThe3rd Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012
Perfect.
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:icon3mmaluvzcupcakez:
3mmaLuvzCupcakez Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful! <3
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:iconnyarmarr:
Nyarmarr Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks!
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:icon3mmaluvzcupcakez:
3mmaLuvzCupcakez Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome! o3o It looks so real!
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:icondeathstalkerx:
DeathStalkerX Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
O_O
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:iconnyarmarr:
Nyarmarr Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
XD
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:iconleximoon:
LexiMoon Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh! So beautiful :D
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:iconnyarmarr:
Nyarmarr Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you!
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:iconabstractshadows:
AbstractShadows Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Beautiful!
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:iconnyarmarr:
Nyarmarr Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
:squee:
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Ixtaek Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012
Потрясающе! Вы по-прежнему принимать запросы? Мне очень жаль, если это плохо переведено, я говорить по-английски обычно и используется он-лайн программа для перевода этого.
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:iconnyarmarr:
Nyarmarr Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you. :)
I don't take requests at the moment, sorry. :(
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:iconixtaek:
Ixtaek Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012
OK, thank you anyway!
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:iconcalamityb31:
CalamityB31 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That, is super awesomely done <3 Ah love it.
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:iconnyarmarr:
Nyarmarr Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you! :)
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:icondemonfiren:
demonfiren Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012
It seems there is enough pony for everyone.
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:iconnyarmarr:
Nyarmarr Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yep. :)
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:iconjustanothergdb:
JustAnotherGDB Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012
Gorgeous, love the lighting effect through the clouds!
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:iconnyarmarr:
Nyarmarr Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks! :)
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:iconscenemuffin:
SceneMuffin Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
О боже мой! Это великолепное произведение искусства! затенение поза и фон! Вы очень хороший художник, а если бы вы просьбы или точкой комиссии были открыты ... В противном случае вы только что получили youreself новый наблюдатель!
c:>
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:iconnyarmarr:
Nyarmarr Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you! ^_^
Sorry, I don't take requests or commissions at the moment. :(
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:iconscenemuffin:
SceneMuffin Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Darn what a buzz i will be looking out when i can get one though! :heart:
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:iconultimatebloodmoney:
UltimateBloodMoney Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
so beast!
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:iconnyarmarr:
Nyarmarr Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
:D
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:iconultimatebloodmoney:
UltimateBloodMoney Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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newwolfstylebymk Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice <3! Lovely
you have Request open or art trade?
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:iconnyarmarr:
Nyarmarr Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks!
I dont take requests or trades atm, sorry. :(
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newwolfstylebymk Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Is fine (:and you are welcome >w<.
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:iconjustax90:
Justax90 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That's some amazing work with the lighting and background.
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:iconnyarmarr:
Nyarmarr Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you!
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KeinZantezuken Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012
Если честно, не особо фанат ОС, но этот бекграунд... это нечто, Няр. Меньше чем за год ты научилась рисовать невероятно красивые иллюстрации. Поздравляю ;3
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:iconnyarmarr:
Nyarmarr Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Спасибо. :) Ну, мне еще есть к чему стремиться. Благо здесь полно мотивирующих примеров. :)
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Sedrik-the-squirrel Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
только пони, только хардкор XD
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