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September 12, 2012
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Twilight by Nyarmarr Twilight by Nyarmarr
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this is really amazing. Keep it up, It's lovely! I love how she just looks calm as she jumps/run through the grass, How you drew her like it was a hand painting, I love this, I wish I can do this, It's very lovely, the sunset in the back around is very beautiful, It goes with the background and How Twilight is, I have nothing bad to say about this, Lovely art work, I wish I could do this, I would be drawing everyday if I could draw like this, You should be happy and proud of your self with this. I love this, You have an eye and hand for Talent.
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While perfectly fine techbically, it seems emotionally dead for me. The sunset, Twilight are really good in themselves but they just.. dont go together. Twiley's face lacks any emotion, just like she's sleepwalking, you could place her in space, mental facility or park without change of overall impression of the piece.
Emotion on Twily's face + more dynamic background (like rooftops or busy town square) for that pose would be perfect; and the sunset would be much better with something like Fluttershy or some romantic episode, or perhaps Apple family returning home from long trip

Still, a really good artwork, I can only dream to make something like that , keep up the good work ^_^
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Catiacaterina Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
This background of twilight look so gorgeous. And Twilight Sparkle herself of course. The eyes of love... Clapping Pony Icon - Twilight Sparkle 
AppleJackShaman Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Twala :)
NicolasDominique Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lovely Twilight :)
Psychosityc Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013
wow...this looks just sweet!
(i dont really wanna critique someone(cuz i cant make somethin as good as this), but her head and small)
still, great work! im like 10/10
DoughnutJoe Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
"You can make it if you try
with a hop, skip and a jump!"

Don't forget to jump, Twi!
LTblackcoat Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012
all in all excellent, very good gradient from light to dark, the clouds are great, the ground area in the background is also great.

the fact her hoof (somewhat) covers the sun is a excellent touch.

the dignified pose is also a great touch.

the eye is excellent.

i feel there needs to be more violet (i think that's the right couler.) in her CM.

that the light source on her is unusual (somewhere at our "8") with no shine on her bridge from the setting sun.

the horn looks good but the line on it seems 2D (as if drawn on).

the viloet in her hair also seems a little pale.

personaly although there could be a good story behind it the hair seems uncharacteristic (messy and even unevenly cut.).

m the ears opening seems a little small.

her thigh seems a little thin.

i like her muzzle.

i do greatly enjoy the piece i feel in review that that the background is masterful, i recommend more focus on the foreground (it is not bad by no means merely great potential).

carry on the good work.
Cd749 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Stunning. Absolutely stunning :)
Dragonstar1278 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
CalaEtMornie Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Twiley is my fave non Princess type MLP character!!!
schneelocke Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2012
Wonderful. One of the best Twilight pictures I've ever seen. :)
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