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Walking in the rain by Nyarmarr Walking in the rain by Nyarmarr
Sweet Celestia, I'm sooo tired of being sick all the time. :noes:
I have a bunch of requests and ideas, but i simply can't work as hard as I have to. It's like torture.
Anyway, here's my new fanart. Hope you like it! :)
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This... wow. <3 I would like to especially ask you how you got their reflections looking as natural as you did and how you did such a subdued background. it's got a very watercolor-y vibe to it that I'm just digging the ever loving heck out of it.

As for the subjects themselves, I'm a huuuuuuuuuuuge fan of Sweetie Belle and Rarity, and I really do like seeing them with sopped manes if only because they're more adorable like this. <3 Again, i like how you didn't try and blend your shadows TOO much and you can still tell that you used a brush tool of some sort to pull off your shading. I actually like what you did with the eyelashes because it looks a lil' less Anime and a little bit more realistic, especially with Sweetie Belle.

I really love what you achieved here with the splashy water effects as well... I think with the slightly more realistic style of cartoon horses you went for here witht his piece that perhapps you might have wanted to consider maybe going the extra mile with some of the details like perhapps doing a couple of muddy flecks on the hooves or something like that. I also think that with how distant and vague the background looks, it looks like they're ina big and empty open space and they might have benefitted from having perhapps a tree or the carousel boutique appear a bit closer to them in teh background so it doesn't look so much like they're standing in a puddle out in the middle of nowhere.
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Holey smokes... best sisters looking their best (yes, they totally look their best with their manes less curly).

You do have quite some skill with making water & water effects look great, especially the reflections, that much is obvious.

Shading-wise, the lighting is really good. If there's one thing I'd change in that department, it's probably subduing the white highlight on the eyes just slightly - would figure that a rainy weather there would not be such an obvious single source of light either. But that's really just nitpicking from me (I'm obsessed, at times, with drawing as realistic eyes I can).

Rarity's body shape seems slightly short for so long-legged, but... err, once again, my sense of anatomy vs. what is probably an intentional stylistic choice. So feel free to ignore that bit - though her cutie mark seems to have dragged a bit down.

Onto the stars:
Vision, well... this is a Really Good Take on the good ol' "Sisterhooves Social: wetmane", not really much to say about that. The clear characters vs. less clear background is great though.

Originality: As original as any pony art picturing something that just short of happened in the show itself. Really good in that light, if not terribly original otherwise.

Technique: As said, utterly love the water effects: the rain, the little splashes and especially the reflection. And the wet manes themselves look amazing, particularly Sweetie's. The eyes could probably stand to be slightly darker, given that it IS raining, but that's also probably excusing that they are, in fact, pastel marshmallow ponies. The rest of the possible negatives I'd have are about anatomy nitpicks from anatomy-obsessor which are fairly pointless to mention probably.

Impact: The meat and potatoes (carrots and hay fries?) of this pic: it hits a Rarity-Sweetie Belle fan like me... like a runaway freight train of cuddly d'awwsomeness. Really inspiring pic - heck, I think I may try my own hoof at drawing this kind of take on the pair sometime soon thanks to this! :D

Overall: one of the better RaritySweetie pics I've seen, definitely a fave.
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Ganondox Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
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Nobody-Hares Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice work, Sweetie Belle looks extremely adorable here.
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PricessOfTheNight Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I simply love this piece. I'm a huge fan of Rarity and Sweetie Belle, and it always does my heart good to see gorgeous artwork like this featuring this two.
I hope to see more pieces like this from you.
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FeanorKelsick Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013
ooh very nice! love the manes and tails, and Rarity's eyes especially are lovely
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califastar Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
♥ ♥ Si Te Giña EL ojo ................. te kiere Conqistar ♥ ♥
♥ ♥ Si Te Mira Mucho ............... .. No podria Vivir Sin Ti ... ♥ ♥
♥ ♥ Si Te Pide Un ... Beso ............ Es Educado ♥ ♥
♥ ♥ Si Te Toma La Mano ............... te Kiere Mucho ♥ ♥
♥ ♥ Si Te Mira De Frente ........... Te kiere Mas De Lo Ke Imaginas ♥ ♥
♥ ♥ Si Te Acaricia El Pelo .............. Esta loco de amor por ti ♥ ♥
♥ ♥ Si Tropieza Contigo ......... ..... Busca Tema De conversacion ♥
♥ ♥ Si Te Aprieta La Mano ............. Gusta De Ti ♥ ♥
♥ ♥ Si Se Despide Despacio ........ . .... No Te podria Dejar ir ♥ ♥
♥ ♥ Si Te Kiere Conocer ................. Busca Tu Amor ♥ ♥
♥ ♥ Si Te Mira de reojo ........ ......... No podria Dejarte ♥ ♥
♥ ♥ Si Suelta Una Lagrima ............ This Triste Muy ♥ ♥
Ahora Pide Un Deseo! ♥ ♥
El ke leyo ESTO Mañana sera el mejor dia de Su vida,
Mañana tu amor sí va a enamorar de ti, USTEDES SE van
a juntar, Pero si no mandas ésto a 20 comentarios! !
Antes de las 12:00 de la noche te Pasara lo peor de la vida!
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OctaviaMelody Featured By Owner May 22, 2013
:O Incredibru!!! :)
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Sarahostervig Featured By Owner May 17, 2013
your arts been recolored [link]
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Emaldon7 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013
Really good!
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10thStarShine Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013
hmm.. the mlp with purple hair reminds me of an old mlp horse i had when i was a kid :aww:
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IphStich Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
Wow, they both look absolutely fantastic. I especially love both of their manes. Sweetie Belle looks so absolutely cute!

If I had one complaint, though, it would be that Rarity's legs are too long. She stands too tall and looks more like Fluer.
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Path0of0cloud Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012
Hard work and talent come together to make this absoultuelty beautiful. The detail on their fur, as well as, on their manes and tails is wonderful. The final touch is the refelctions in the water, something a lot of people forget about.

You may have just killed Spike with this; I doubt his heart could take it.
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Amelia-Seyruun Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012
Sweet Celestia is right!
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Yasmeeeen Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
cool
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Yasmeeeen Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
cool
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DuraSpaz Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2012
Really love this one
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lonely-in-winter Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Professional Writer
This picture is gorgeous! I especially love the eyes!
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blanket86 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
This is so amazing! Great work! :-)
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ReadToasts Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sweetie Bot feels funny when gets water contact.
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Bioshock140 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012
Beautiful.
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onelilmermaid Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow! Great detail, very stunning!
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Tyruas Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sweeeetie Belle~ <3
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Silverlegends Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That Sweetie Belle :icondatcutiemarkplz:
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Komatsuzaki-Xingqi Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Sweetie Belle is so adorable!
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OriensRex Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
too cute
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DeJiKo07 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
Wow....Rarity always looks hot with wet mane!!!
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Attemborough Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
Rarity and Sweetie Belly are very adorable and elegant in your artwork!!
GJ!
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hectorbector11 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
I really like this. It looks... clean, despite the sketchy style of it.
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Pia-sama Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
being pretty is familly stuff xD
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CMoretzfan19 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
oh my gosh its adorabe!! :D
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Sire-Sword Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It docent get any sexier then wet mane rarity. Cept maybe Luna in socks.
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Spetsnaz-Marksman Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
Very nice work!
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TheNittles Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's Sweetie's face that just makes the whole picture.
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Montiessor Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Like it?.... I LOVE IT!
The effects, the looks, the forms the background... TOTAL PERFECTION!
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EverlastingJoy Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
Gorgeous, absolutely beautiful.
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Thejboy88 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
:iconsweetiebellplz: "I'm siiiingin in the rain. Just siiiiingin in the rain!"

:iconrarityplz: "Sweetie Belle please! It's un-ladylike to sing in the rain!"

:iconsweetiebelleplz: "But sis! You sing in the shower!"

:iconrarityplz: "(Cough). That's between us dear."
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Bleach3s Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
And then Rarity started shrieking uncontrollably
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Tekiray Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Lovely !
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VioletStar166 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Нянянянян!!!
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Xertex Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012
Eye-catching. It's pleasuring to look at :D
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Polkin Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice :)
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Coltboy Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh my goodness. It's wonderful! Very, very nice work!
I haven't seen a Rarity piece that has been so satisfying to me as this one in some time.
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DemonPanther Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
Yay for bonding! And getting wet is about as much "dirty" Rarity can handle xD
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TheBlondeh Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Wow! that is really Beautiful!
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maverickd-mjd Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
Wet Rarity hair is Best Rarity hair.

Awesome piece. I really like the reflections in the water.
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joeyh3 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very adorable!
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sweetsweetsunshines Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
cute ^^
hope you feel better soon!
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Star--Sprout Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Student General Artist
My gosh, Rarity is actually...in the pouring rain?!?! Woww....
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DefeatDeception Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Can't put my finger on why, but this is one of my favorite pieces I've ever seen!
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DarthWill3 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sweetie Belle's just too cute!
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Pink--Champagne Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
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